雅思小作文表格题7分范文 underground railway systems
这篇雅思写作小作文范文选自剑桥雅思5的第四套题目。它要求我们描述6个城市中的地铁系统，包括它们开始运营的时间，总长度，与每年的乘客数量。下面让我们研究下这篇范文，以及考官给出7分的理由。
雅思写作小作文题目
The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
雅思写作小作文范文
The table shows the details regarding the underground railway systems in six cities.
该表格展示了6个城市中地铁系统的细节信息。
London has the oldest underground railway systems among the six cities. It was opened in the year 1863, and it is already 140 years old. Paris is the second oldest, in which it was opened in the year 1900. This was then followed by the opening of the railway systems in Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto. Los Angeles has the newest underground railway system, and was only opened in the year 2001. In terms of the size of the railway system, London, for certain, has the largest underground railway systems. It has 394 kilometres of route in total, which is nearly twice as large as the system in Paris. Kyoto, in contrast, has the smallest system. It only has 11 kilometres of route, which is more than 30 times less than that of London.
伦敦在六个城市中拥有最为古老的地铁系统。它于1863年开通，到现在已经有140年的时间。巴黎是第二古老的城市，地铁系统开通于1900年。东京、华盛顿与京都的地铁系统紧随其后。洛杉矶的地铁系统最新，2001年才开通。至于地铁系统的规模，伦敦无疑拥有最大的地铁系统。其长度总计394公里，几乎是巴黎的两倍。与之相反，京都的地铁系统规模最小，只有11公里，不到伦敦的三十分之一。
Interestingly, Tokyo, which only has 155 kilometres of route, serves the greatest number of passengers per year, at 1927 millions passengers. The system in Paris has the second greatest number of passengers, at 1191 millions passengers per year. The smalest underground railway system, Kyoto, serves the smallest number of passengers per year as predicted.
有趣的是，只有155公里地铁系统的东京却服务着明年数量最多的游客，达到19亿2千700万。巴黎的系统拥有数量第二大的乘客，每年为11亿9钱1百万。京都最小的地铁系统每年服务的乘客数量也最小。
In conclusion, the underground railway systems in different cities vary a lot in the size of the system, the number of passengers served per year and in the age of the system.
总的来说，不同城市中的地铁系统在规模，每年服务的乘客数量，以及系统年限方面都有很大差别。
考官评价
该答案在选取和描述信息方面做的比较好。清晰的界定出关键特征，并很好地强调和说明了它们的差异。答案主题相关，十分准确，并且拥有清晰的概述。
信息逻辑架构清晰，使用了一系列的信号词和连接词。其中大部分准确、恰当，偶有错误发生。
作者成功使用了一些不常用的词汇，对写作风格有明确的认知。但偶尔有不准确和重复的地方。语法结构控制的很好。句子多样，普遍比较准确，只有很小的错误。
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