剑桥雅思7 test 1大作文考官范文解析 天赋与教育
这篇雅思写作大作文要求探讨的问题与剑桥雅思5 test 4大作文的主题比较相似，都是天赋和教育到底哪个重要。不过这道题目限定了范围，即必须是在运动和音乐领域进行讨论。类型上来说，它属于典型的讨论双方观点。其常见的行文结构我们之前已经讨论过，不太清楚的同学可以参考以下文章：雅思写作大作文结构 讨论双方观点类文章该怎么写
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剑桥雅思7 test 1大作文题目
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
剑桥雅思7 test 1大作文考官范文
The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.
Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.
However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.
I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.
In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.
剑桥雅思7 test 1考官范文解析
Task Response
1. 文章全面回答了题目中的问题。第一段改写题目，说明天赋与教育是一个常见的话题，尤其是在体育、艺术和音乐领域。第二段和第三段分别讨论题目中给出的两种观点，第四段表达自己的观点，认为这两者不是互相排斥，而是相辅相成的。最后一段重申自己的态度。
2. 文章对各个论点进行了充分的论证。第二自然段以学校教育为例，说明教育可以让人们获取某些技能。第三自然段论述天赋的重要性，重点放在这是无法通过培训或者教育获得的。第四自然段表明自己的观点，一开始先说天赋很重要，但天赋和教育对于成功而言缺一不可。
Coherence and Cohesion
1. 文章分段比较合理。没有采用我们开头所说的四段式的结构，而是额外增加了一段自己的观点。可见雅思写作并没有什么特别固定的套路，只要保证一个自然段一个主题，没有交叉即可。
2. 这篇文章主要使用连接词来串联不同的句子，其中夹杂逻辑链接的方式。如第二自然段的so；第三自然段开头的however，中间的in other words；第四自然段while，but等。与此同时，我们也要注意到，除了这些连接词连接的句子之外，其他句子是如何通过在开头提及上一句中的成分来进行逻辑连接的。
Lexical Resource
文章用词十分灵活，涉及范围也很广。具体内容可以参考下面“高分词汇短语”板块。
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
1. 作为雅思官方给出的范文，这篇文章肯定不存在任何语法错误。
2. 这篇文章几乎每一个句子都是复杂句，涉及的语法结构极为多样，包括：时间状语从句，同位语从句，限定性定语从句，比较级，no matter how引导的状语从句，while引导的并列等等。
剑桥雅思7 test 1高分词汇短语总结
relative importance 相对重要性，relative用来削弱语气
be based on the belief that … 建立在…信念的基础上
acquire different skills 获取不同的技能
plenty of 充足的
guided practice 指导之下的练习
innate adj. 天生的，先天的
differentiate v. 区分
inherit v. 继承
excel v. 擅长，突出
manage v. 设法完成，设法达到
be mutually exclusive 互相排斥
exceptional adj. 杰出的
continuous adj. 持续的
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