雅思G类书信写作范文 给银行写信申请商业贷款
本期雅思书信小作文要讲到的是与商业有关，也与银行有关。有关银行话题的书信作文，我们之前练习的不是特别的多在雅思考题中出现的频率适中。但是，这个话题和我们日常生活息息相关，因为我们经常会去银行办理一些业务。在国外，有的时候不太方便去银行，那么完全可以给银行的业务经理写一封信，把所需要的事情在信中交代清楚，这样以方便日后银行的操作。
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 你需要花二十分钟来完成这个任务
You want to start your own small business. Write a letter to a bank requesting information about obtaining a business loan to finance your new company. 你想要自己做个生意。写一封信给银行索取一些关于获得商业贷款来资助你公司的信息
In your letter, include the following information: 在信件中包括如下信息
- what kind of business you want to start 你想要经营什么样的生意
- how much money you need 你需要多少钱
- the length of time over which you would expect to repay the money 你想要贷款多久
Write at least 150 words. 不低于150词
You do NOT need to write any addresses. 不要写出任何地址
参考范文（建议对着题目要求先写自己练习一遍，然后再参考范文学习）：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the possibility of a business loan from your bank to finance a startup business I have planned to commence soon. I am hoping you would provide me with some information and document requirements so that I can apply for the loan.
写信是为了咨询一下从贵银行获取商业贷款来资助我即将开展的创业相关生意的可能性。我希望您能提供一些信息和相关要求的文件以便我能够申请贷款。
I have completed my graduation from the University of Edison and my major was marketing. Now I am interested to start a coffee shop of my own and need a loan to support it. This article is from Laokaoya website. I own the location of the shop and have some prior experience of working at a large coffee shop. A business outlining firm responsible for the business plan has suggested a capital requirement of $10,000 for the coffee shop. I can finance 50% of the fund requirement and need another $5000 as a loan from your bank.
我从Edison大学毕业，曾就读于市场营销。现在，我很想开一家自己的咖啡店，需要一些贷款支持。我有商店的地址，之前也有一些在大型咖啡店工作的经历。一个负责商业计划的商业企划公司建议需要一万美金来开咖啡店。我能够达到百分之五十的要求，需要从贵银行获取另外五千美金的贷款。
My father would be ready to be a guarantor for the loan and I can repay the loan amount with interests within 2 years. However, I need three months’ grace period before I start repaying my monthly installment.
我的父亲可以准备成为我贷款保证人，我能够把贷款本金和利息在两年内还回。然而，在我开始我的月度还款之前需要三个月的缓冲期。
I would really appreciate if you could send me details of the loan including the interest rates, monthly installment amount and so on. Also, forward me the documents I need to fill in and submit to actually apply for the loan.
如果您能够把贷款的具体细节告诉我的话，我会非常感谢，包括利息、月度还款额等等。另外，也请把我需要填写并提交的文档也转发给我。
Yours faithfully,
致敬
Joe Smith
类似的与银行相关的小作文我们之前也写过几篇，希望大家同时都能巩固练习一下，相关题目如下：
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