雅思G类小作文范文 写给兼职公司的一封信part-time job工作情况反馈信
本期的雅思培训类写作主要解析到是一封由下属员工写给上司的信。写此类信件的时候需要考生考虑好信件的格式以及风格。通常而言，该信件不是属于非常随意的形式，所以最好不要使用非正式文体。可以考虑正式文体以及semi-formal的文体。当然，选择哪个还得取决于你设定的下属和上司的关系程度。
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
你需要花二十分钟来完成此项任务
You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
最近，你在本地的一家公司做着兼职的工作。过了几个星期，你发现工作中出了一些问题。
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:
写一封信给公司的主管，在你的信中包括：
- explain why you took the job 解释为什么你做了这个工作
- describe the problems that you experienced 描述清楚你遇到的问题
- suggest what could be done about them 对于这些问题给出你自己的建议
Write at least 150 words. 不少于150个词
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ………,
Dear Mr. Johnson:
亲爱的Johnson先生：
I have joined your company as a part-time employee a few weeks ago and I am indebted for the opportunity you have bestowed on me. I took the job to finish my internship – which is a requirement to complete my Bachelor degree. However, some challenges are impeding our work performance and I need your help to solve them.
几个星期以前我在你们公司做了一个兼职，我很感觉您给我这个机会。我做这个兼职的原因是需要完成我的实习，这个实习是完成我本科学业的一个要求。然而，一些挑战制约了们的工作发挥，需要您的帮助来解决它们。
During this short span of my work, I have noticed some problems that are obstacles to the overall progress of the company. To start with, I help other data analysts with different data from various sources as per the requirement. This article is translated from Laokaoya website. I have to collect the same data many times. The main reason behind this redundant work is the lack of an MIS reporting software and a solid database system. We can avail many benefits by using that type of software. It would both ensure better performance of employees and data security.
在这短暂的兼职期间，我发现了一些问题，这些问题成为了整个公司发展的障碍。首先，为了完成工作要求，我帮助数据分析师处理了来自不同来源的数据。我不得不反复收集同样的数据。有个这个多余任务的主要原因就是我们缺少一个MIS汇报软件以及一个强健的数据库系统。使用这种软件可以获得很多好处。它能确保更好的员工表现，
Moreover, we have to take our lunch outside and this kills our valuable time. Lunch arrange by the office would ensure hygienic meals, and save our time which we could better utilize in the office.
除此之外，我们还得再外面吃午饭，这浪费了我们宝贵的时间。公司安排午餐的话能保证餐食的卫生，也节省了我们的世界，这样我们能够更好利用办公室时间。
Therefore, I request you to implement an MIS software for our office, which would be a really prudent investment in the long run. Besides, please arrange lunch for the employees as soon as possible.
因此，我请求您能够在我们办公室运用MIS软件，长远看着会有一个很好的投资回报。另外，也请您能够尽快帮员工安排一下午餐。
Yours faithfully,
致敬
Vanessa Quan
